Friday, August 6, 2021

Alma writing

Alma is happy because she gets to go out on a walk. She has a big smile like shes in  photo.  She fells as happy as a playful monkey.

We are to learning to generate  descriptive language for Alma

i think i can do better by adding more detail.


 



 


2 comments:

  1. Hi Frank

    Hope you are all good in your bubble!

    I enjoyed reading your descriptive writing that you have created all about Alma.
    She really is an interesting little girl.
    I like that you have used similies in your writing.

    Remember to check your spelling before you post your work onto your blog. I like that you have added playful to the monkey, it makes it much more interesting.

    Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home!

    Until next time

    Mrs Costello :)

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  2. Good work, Frank. "As happy as a playful monkey"! Please write something about what you are doing today as well.

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